Belmore South Poem
This is a poem I have made up! I have decided that I should do as much as poems I could do! Here is the poem that I had made up:
Belmore South Public School
Is fantastic is very cool
The teachers there are very nice
They listen to our problems and give us advice
The school canteen provides healthy food
This helps us stay in a happy mood
Area 6 and 7 are so lush and green
It really makes such a wonderful scene
The buildings are so strongly built
They’re just so straight not even a tilt
The children have so many talents
This in their way of life will help them balance
Our schools education keeps getting higher
This is thanks to Mrs Dyer
Our school is great now you know why
It’s because of all these reasons that makes us fly high.
I hope you enjoyed this poem. Please comment back and tell me what you think of it!
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Hi Sarah,
i just enjoy that poem, i read it every time. ( That’s how much i like it!! )
I think you are going to be a poetry, when you grow up!!
Depends, how good you are!
I never want to leave Belmore South because its a great school!!
Although this school has been built for a long time. ( Even before we were born! )
Well, i guess i just have to stay here for another 2 years!!
Bye!
Posted October 29, 2008, 1:52 pm~ Katherine ~
Hi Sarah
Posted October 30, 2008, 2:39 pmI just love you poems you make keep up the great work. I hope you make up heaps more poems so you can get heaps of comments. Can you teach me how to make up really good poems like you?
Bye Latika
Hi Sarah! That was a really good poem, and very creative! I have never been to that school, but the way you put it, it seems to be a very good school!!
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i think your poem is great
Posted March 21, 2009, 3:04 am