The Lemon Tree!
At home I made up a poem called ‘The Lemon Tree’. Here is the Poem!!
The sky is blue
What shall I do?
It is an autumn morning
Although it is really boring
I look out of my window and what do I see
A tall green Lemon tree.
I go outside and say I’m dreaming
But I’m not, it’s unbelieving
I’ve never had a Lemon Tree
Now you say I’m right you see
I wake up and yell STOP!
It has been a dream has it not!
All I ever wanted was a Lemon tree
Now it’s gone never to be seen!
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Hi sarah,
are a poetry expert, because that poem just reminded me of something. Any the poem sounded great !! I wish i could write on like that as well as creating great and very creative stories.
Okay, that is all i have to say!!
Posted September 29, 2008, 2:28 pmHappy holidays Sarah!!
Hey Sarah
That was really good! I like the part most at the end where you say it was gone an never to be seen ven though it was a really simple sentence I somehow liked it more than the others. You seemed to fix the words together like magic. Excellent!
I think you have a talent for poems… you should work more on them and create more to share with us!! I’m sure we’d all like to see your progress.
Nadine
Posted October 14, 2008, 1:32 pmHey Sarah,
Posted November 10, 2008, 4:49 amI really like your poem. I wish I could find a Lemon Tree. That would be really neat. What caught my eye was the bright red writing. I love reading poems and that was very good. You should write some more and if you do then tell me.
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Megan
Your poem is good
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Posted March 21, 2009, 3:01 am